Editor: Edward Olsen
Special thanks to Phyllis D. Morris for her work as well
| First occurs on page: | US | UK | Page |
| 1 | yellowing; the use | yellowing – for the use | 7 |
| 2 | around | round | 8 |
| 5 | Mrs. Number Seven | Mrs Number Seven opposite | 10 |
| 11 | punching bag | punchball | 15 |
| 35 | Arthur’s just | Arthur has just | 37 |
| 36 | weirdos’ prison | weirdo prison | 38 |
| 39 | forward | forwards | 40 |
| 41 | GET TO BED | GET UP TO BED | 42 |
| 61 | baseboard | skirting board | 59 |
| 65 | Sorcerer’s Stone | Philosopher’s Stone | 63 |
| 66 | while | whilst | 64 |
| 70 | well shut of him | well shot of him | 68 |
| 76 | leaned | leant | 73 |
| 83 | a split second later | within a split second | 80 |
| 83 | “That’d come off, though,” | ‘That’d come orf, though,’ | 80 |
| 104 | stopping puking | stopping themselves puking | 98 |
| 119 | eating his chops | eating his chop | 110 |
| 125 | dumpster | skip | 115 |
| 126 | stop his eyes from watering | stop his eyes watering | 117 |
| 127 | short queues of wizards were forming | short queues were forming | 117 |
| 156 | up close | close-to | 142 |
| 157 | mashed potatoes | mashed potato | 143 |
| 160 | assigned | set | 146 |
| 188 | “Who’s Hufflepuff?” | ‘Who are Hufflepuffs?’ | 171 |
| 213 | judgment | judgement | 193 |
| 217 | person who was stared at | person who is stared at | 196 |
| 218 | he’s a madman | he’s mad | 197 |
| 219 | was turner paler | was going pale | 197 |
| 222 | Hogsmeade weekend in October | Hogsmeade weekend, which was to be in October | 201 |
| 225 | schedules | timetables | 203 |
| 227 | spirits up | peckers up | 205 |
| 235 | cracked trusting Snape | cracked to trust Snape | 212 |
| 239 | replaced by: Course Aims: 1. | replaced by the ‘Course Aims’. 1. | 216 |
| 248 | “Have a biscuit,” she repeated impatiently, indicating a tartan tin of cookies lying on top | ‘Have a biscuit,” she repeated impatiently, indicating a tartan tin lying on top | 223 |
| 257 | reviewing | revising | 232 |
| 275 | you’ve gotten | you’ve got | 247 |
| 279 | candy wrappers | sweet wrappers | 251 |
| 279 | chink of sunlight | ray of sunlight | 251 |
| 307 | approve | approve of | 274 |
| 307 | August 30th | 30th August | 275 |
| 309 | dunces who get D’s | dunces who get a “D” | 277 |
| 311 | “T?” asked Hermione, looking appalled. “Even lower than a D? What on earth does that stand for?” | ‘”T”?’ asked Hermione, looking appalled. “Even lower than a “D”? What on earth does “T” stand for?’ | 278 |
| 328 | had gotten | had got | 294 |
| 328 | second | nanosecond | 293 |
| 342 | Sorcerous Stone. Sorcerer’s | Philological Stone. Philosopher’s | 305 |
| 350 | Tournament — The knowledge that all | Tournament — knowing all | 312 |
| 353 | stone slide | stone slide like a helter-skelter | 314 |
| 452 | lamps burst into light | torches burst into flame | 400 |
| 452 | looking dreamy as always | looking as dreamy as usual | 400 |
| 453 | what Nargles were | what Nargles are | 400 |
| 468 | bangs | fringe | 414 |
| 483 | “Wotcher. We’re | Wotcher,’ she said, ‘we’re | 427 |
| 486 | (Unliftable jinxes, hexes, and incorrectly | Unliftable jinxes, hexes, incorrectly | 429 |
| 486 | scrofungulus) | scrofunglus, etc. | 429 |
| 486 | TEAROOM AND HOSPITAL SHOP | TEAROOM / HOSPITAL SHOP | 429 |
| 498 | it’s really good | skiing’s really good | 440 |
| 501 | except that it said things like “Do it today or later you’ll pay!” every time he opened a page | except that every time he opened a page it said aloud things like: ‘Do it today or later you’ll pay!’ | 443 |
| 503 | the foot’s space | the foot of space | 445 |
| 505 | with the knowledge or consent of it’s owner, had had a similar Enlarging Spell put upon it as the Weasley’s old Ford Anglia; | with the consent of it’s owner, had been enlarge with a spell like the Weasley’s old Ford Anglia had once been. | 447 |
| 506 | walnut | satsuma | 447 |
| 512 | potted plant | pot plant | 453 |
| 526 | There was more retching from downstairs, followed by a horrible spattering sound. | there was a retching sound from downstairs, followed by a horrible spattering noise | 465 |
| 529 | he headed off to the library to pick up Ron and Hermione before their afternoon lessons, walking in a rather bouncy way himself. | he virtually bounced off to the library to pick up Ron and Hermione before their afternoon lessons | 467 |
| 543 | Augustus Rookwood | Algernon Rookwood | 480 |
| 546 | potted-plant | pot plant | 482 |
| 593 | having gotten | having got | 523 |
| 610 | Minister of Magic | Minister for Magic | 537 |
| 610 | positioned on either side | positioned either side | 538 |
| 636 | review | revision | 561 |
| 648 | again at once, rigid | again, rigid | 571 |
| 648 | but Sirius said, “Locomotor mortis!” and Snape keeled over again at once, rigid as a board. | but Sirius said, ‘Petrificus Totalus!’ and Snape keeled over again, rigid as a board. | 571 |
| 651 | Career Advice | Careers Advice | 574 |
| 651 | study schedule | revision timetables | 574 |
| 652 | schedule | timetable | 574 |
| 654 | review | revise | 576 |
| 654 | trapped inside, traipsing | trapped inside, revising, traipsing | 576 |
| 658 | studying | revision | 579 |
| 682 | turned left, and ran along it | turned left and run along it | 601 |
| 703 | studying | revising | 620 |
| 706 | study habits | revision practices | 623 |
| 708 | theory exams | theory papers | 625 |
| 709 | next summer | that summer | 625 |
| 721 | No fewer than four Stunners had shot from the figures around the cabin toward Professor McGonagall. | The figures around the cabin had shot no fewer than four Stunners at Professor McGonagall. | 636 |
| 721 | Professor Tofty, who seemed | Professor Tofty, who also seemed | 636 |
| 721 | she looked luminous, illuminated by an eerie red glow, then was lifted | she looked luminous and glowed an eerie red, then she lifted | 636 |
| 722 | Hagrid, his voice carrying clearly | Hagrid; his voice carried clearly | 636 |
| 724 | notes stacked three-and-a-half feet high | three-and-a-half-feet-high stack of notes | 639 |
| 769 | security man | watchwizard | 678 |
| 769 | sure that their | sure their | 678 |
| 804 | Neville spun himself around | Neville span himself around | 709 |
| 815 | And then Harry’s scar burst open and he knew | Then Harry’s scar burst open. He knew | 719 |
| 815 | light had flown | light flew | 719 |
| 815 | snake had struck | snake struck | 719 |
| 845 | active once more | once more active | 745 |
| 851 | your dad’s mate | a mate of your dad | 750 |
| 857 | end-of-term feast | end-of-term leaving feast | 755 |
| 857 | end-of-term feast | Leaving Feast | 756 |
| 858 | the other | the other of the pair | 756 |
| 864 | squeezed into Hogwarts uniforms | squeezed into Hogwarts uniform | 761 |
copyright 2003 Edward Olsen, used by permission
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